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PostSubject: The Dawes Legacy   Fri 06 Aug 2010, 2:39 am

The Dawes Legacy is my only story at the moment. I have other ideas but no time or energy to write them up! It actually started out when I read the first part of Senja's Gardener's Dream legacy.

It is the Story of Ambrosia Dawes (my founder) and her legacy. Generally I am trying to keep to the legacy rules but sometimes my storyline ideas take over!! I try to publish each Sunday but I may publish in between occasionally Smile Hope you enjoy it...I appreciate any comments!!

Part One - New Beginnings
Part Two - Independence
Part Three - A bad night
Part Four - Difficult Decisions
Part Five - A New Arrival
Part Six - Some Big Changes
Part Seven - Life Goes On
Part Eight - Big Decisions
Part Nine - A New Friend
Part Ten - A Giant Leap
Part Eleven - Preparations are Made
Part Twelve - Vows are Said


I have also created a family tree with the legacy characters on (Don't look unless you are up to date with the story!!)
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PostSubject: Re: The Dawes Legacy   Sat 07 Aug 2010, 2:02 pm

Hi Naomi! I've read the first part of your legacy and like it very much. Little by little I will read it all. Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: The Dawes Legacy   Sat 07 Aug 2010, 2:07 pm

Pleased to be independent! I can fully understand that! Smile

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PostSubject: Re: The Dawes Legacy   Sat 07 Aug 2010, 2:14 pm

Shocked Oh dear, that must be horrible if she even doesn't remember what happend that night! I wonder how she knew that he was the father... for as I know... it could have been 'cosmic influince' Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: The Dawes Legacy   Sat 07 Aug 2010, 5:10 pm

Chapter 4 is a very short one but I loved to see how she cut a reduction cupon out of the newspaper! She doesn't even think about asking for help to the father of the baby? Smile

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PostSubject: Re: The Dawes Legacy   Sat 07 Aug 2010, 5:19 pm

I really do love chapter V. Fortunately for her that he gave her some money. Let's hope he won't forget to send some in the future. Rolling Eyes

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PostSubject: Re: The Dawes Legacy   Sat 07 Aug 2010, 5:29 pm

Fortunately her life is getting a bit easier now that Hector has to go to school! Nice 6th part. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: The Dawes Legacy   Sat 07 Aug 2010, 5:35 pm

Such a quiet but lonesome life! She definately needs something more in her life! Neutral

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PostSubject: Re: The Dawes Legacy   Sat 07 Aug 2010, 5:39 pm

A very big decision indeed. He's just the same as his father. Let's hope he hasn't got the same character! Rolling Eyes

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PostSubject: Re: The Dawes Legacy   Sat 07 Aug 2010, 5:46 pm

Part 9 already! I never have met Cyclone in my game. Most probably because I use to play more with my own made simmies. So go ahead Ambrosia; you will be all-right! Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: The Dawes Legacy   Sat 07 Aug 2010, 5:55 pm

A very romantic chapter the 10th one. So glad that you have already 12 chapters. Now I can read them all at the stretch (is that word correct?) Embarassed

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PostSubject: Re: The Dawes Legacy   Sat 07 Aug 2010, 6:03 pm

Very beautiful the wedding! I will be looking forward to seeing the next chapter! Laughing

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PostSubject: Re: The Dawes Legacy   Sat 07 Aug 2010, 6:09 pm

Naomi... Duck.... I am reading your legacy as soon as I finished my legacy house challenge! Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: The Dawes Legacy   Sat 07 Aug 2010, 10:06 pm

Thank you for all the lovely comments Mar Very Happy I've never been much of a writer but I just had to try writing something....sorry that some of the parts are a bit short....long writing like essays and things has never been my strong point...I just can't structure them....lol Very Happy

Really looking forward to hearing your comments and seeing your legacy house Fred!! I'm expecting great things based on your entry into my last contest!!
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PostSubject: Re: The Dawes Legacy   Wed 11 Aug 2010, 5:35 pm

I love you LOVE the Dawes Legacy!!! I love you

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PostSubject: Re: The Dawes Legacy   Wed 11 Aug 2010, 9:22 pm

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I love you LOVE the Dawes Legacy!!! I love you
Thanks Fred Very Happy I'm trying to get the next part up but I am just exhausted at the moment Sad
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