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PostSubject: The Dazzling War   Thu 26 Aug 2010, 12:53 pm

Just a story I have wanted to write for a while already... Smile

The story is highly inspired Bonnie and Clyde and some other things so the idea might not be that original but I have couple new ideas, just wait and see Wink

Prelude

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PostSubject: Re: The Dazzling War   Thu 26 Aug 2010, 1:33 pm

looks really good, very mysterious!! Smile I am looking forward to the next installment.
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PostSubject: Re: The Dazzling War   Thu 26 Aug 2010, 2:02 pm

Good writing Senja! I enjoyed that!!! Is it going to be without screen shots?

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PostSubject: Re: The Dazzling War   Fri 27 Aug 2010, 11:10 am

Yes, I agree with Fred. It's written very nicely. I thought it was only a short story but now I noticed that it's the intro to your new story. It will be great but I hope that there will be some screens as well to lighten the story.

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PostSubject: Re: The Dazzling War   Fri 27 Aug 2010, 11:33 am

Aww, thank you girls, I'm so happy you like the intro I love you

Fred and Margo: I'm going to add some screenshots, descriptive writing in English is not my strongest point(although it would be good to practice a little) and I'm used to writing about sims, or at least to use sims as a way to make the story more alive...

So yes, the next update, whenever I get the time to finish it, will be with pictures... flower

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PostSubject: The Dazzling War - Hunger and Fire   Thu 21 Oct 2010, 2:07 pm

Again with no screenshots, sorry Crying or Very sad

But anyways, this will start the story from where all the events started, I hope you enjoy...

The Dazzling War - Hunger and Fire

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PostSubject: Re: The Dazzling War   Thu 21 Oct 2010, 3:29 pm

Great! I will have myself a nice cup of coffee and sit down to read the story! Meanwhile you can start a challenge for us to create the sims and the screenies! hahaha... see how we see it in our minds...LOL... just kidding. (It would be a great challenge though) I will comment on it later on your blog! I have to read it first! Thanks for the update!!!!

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